Well im not Language specialist. And i do mistakes also. For sure someone who knows english better will find mistakes in my post, and much more in yours (excluding that i already pointed) But this is just brainrape. If you are dd as you are educated. I assume you are still on talking island village somewhere between 2-4 level. Also what is this <text><space><dot> (..."to pt . "...) Are you typing like that normally? You know that is serious brain issue? Even my grandmother knows how to use dots on PC correctly. I wish to see that you are sending CV with dots like that xD If someone will take you thats means someone in HR is blind XD
Depends on occupation, for some IT related they require CV in english (for international company) as a proof of language knowledge (?)