Garden of Genesis - Lineage2 My Artwork

Hello everyone, it is a pleasure to participate in the forum and to make the friendships that I have made here, I am fan of Lineage and designer, I would like to present if possible my Fan art of Lineage2 Garden of Genesis. I added some effects and little changed in relation to the game.
Working time was approximately 3 hours, I am open to tips, criticism, suggestions or if you want to expose your own Fan art to look here too please Thank you.

 

Last time I made art, I wasn't able to tell which stickman was me and which one was the opponent. I decided to stop.

So coming from a potato, no real criticism or tip is to be expected...

 

is this /b?